His Sassy Omega by Raiven Matthews

#mmromance #omegaverse #mpreg #grr

The premise of this story I got and it was fine. The execution could have been a lot better.

First off, this was edited and changed on Amazon, which is great, but it needed a couple of more rounds of edits. This story suffers from too many words and paragraphs. This should have been a 200 page story not an almost 400 page one. There were so many things that should have been cut.

Second off, I honestly though at the beginning that this was going to be a R/D across the aisle story and I was ready to end and move on, but then I wondered if this was just a ham fisted way of creating a stick in the mud guy and kept going. Just so everyone knows, Northern CA has normal people and the rest are not "common" people.

Thirdly, the story. We have here an older Alpha who thought he wanted a "sweet" omega who would take care of the house, kids, and him and be obedient. What he got was a "sassy" omega who wants none of that. We know he is sassy as the word sass is used over and over again.

They are fated mates who fight against it, well the omega does, and after the longest freaking time find out they are preggers and we all know it ends with a HEA.

The good parts of this was the fact that the omega ended up the dom and the alpha was more subservient. Not too much, cause he was Alpha!! as we are told repeatedly.

The bad part was the whole baby storyline. The alpha was supposedly supporting the omega's choice but then did a dance when he saw the ultrasound? Then basically talks the omega into keep being pregnant. It was all your body, your choice until it wasn't.

This was a bad pregnancy and trigger warnings for those who cannot read about almost losing a baby. Maybe I missed the warning as I was taken by surprised by it.

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