The Guilty Canvas (A Fresh Taste of Ink Book 2) by Daniel May




Oh Mini. If not for you I would not want to keep going with these other two. You are the jam in their really messed up sandwich.

In this episode, we have Zee who is going to be away for a month and Trinket who goes all out with being with Mini. At this point, the cheating is like the least of the issues involving these three. By the end of this one, we have Zee and Mini meeting, so progress!

But the one thing that stood out to me was how much better the writing got at around 75% or when Zee and Trinket go on their out of the city trip. It was a radical change for the better and I actually felt the emotions our unreliable narrator Trinket had.

I mean, how could you not be on #teammini?

      -- “In terms of shiftiness,” Mini elaborated. “He lied to you about drugs, treated you to the worst first fuck, and is just kind of dense and stupid about how to treat you in general. You cheated long, hard, and often, and are just kind of sociopathic in general. You’re both awful people. But you love each other, right?” --

      --“I feel like I’m either in the lead up to a porno or a double homicide,” Said Mini --

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